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Post by Guest on Thu Jul 26, 2012 1:42 am

Haha suckers. I'd like a little feedback on the debut of Kitty Legit into ASWF. She's a new invention of mine. Hope u all like her. But I do need this one time feedback moment to better advance her as an individual. What'd you think of her? Did you like her? Is she an interesting character? Yeah. Give me the real shit. I like REAL. Not reality tv real, but like porn film without musical score added type of real.

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Post by The Dirrty Rican on Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:12 am

"Ahh ... that's a legit black, sassy female. I can smell the scent a mile away!"

Actually, a very good debut, a couple of errors in the spelling dept but that is no biggie really. The story flowed well. The description of that white chick was hilarious, I could picture that look. Seeing the chick got the wrong women and a helluva beatdown, then to get cuffed and put in the back of the vehicle, now friends with a strange chick, I can't imagine what it's gonna be like in the jail cell. Overall, Kitty Legit came out strong, she is full of beauty but she can be full of venom when approached the wrong way. You gots my attention with this character. GL in that battle.

I'll give this a 7.5/10 because I know that the progression will prove to be much better now that you got the first one out.
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Post by Jackson Ford on Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:16 am

I told you on aim I liked it. I also know that you have been wanting to write as a chick. If you can take control of her like you did with Sully in that other place I can see you taking her to the Global championship.
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