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Feedback on my debut

Post by Jackson Ford on Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:49 am

let me know what you all thought of my debut aSWF rp. I have a story that I pretty much originally had written out but I figured to break it down in small dossage and leave a couple of cliff hangers Hopefully u all liked it.
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Post by CODY FN TAYLOR on Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:01 am

All in all it was well written, The shoot was good as was your CD but some more CD would have been nice but other than that I would give it 7/7.5/8

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Post by Jackson Ford on Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:19 am

thanks.. the Cd will be worth the wait though trust me.
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Post by Guest on Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:48 am

if its not worth the wait i swear to god imma send to hell with Harvey Keitel and Rodney Dangerfield and Hitler WILL shove a pineapple up YER ASS.

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Post by Guest on Fri Jul 27, 2012 11:30 am

We have alot of history and ran in big circles with Proving Grounds, F1X .. RWA sft/SFW.. We're never seen eye to eye but one thing is for sure. Your rps are pretty decent. I know when ASWF gets going people will see more and more..from you.

@ ASWF: trust me... he is good

Now, I do like this rp because it was short and to the poiint. Some people can talk all day and never say word. Unlike you. As you see, the points are made, the writing was clean.. I think this was pretty decent.. Yes the CD needs more but good enough...



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@ Matt, I do like the beginning.. I mean, I loved it!!!

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