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Post by Guest on Fri Jul 27, 2012 2:23 pm

I know this RP has nothing to do with this fed at all but since the likes of Cody and James have actually seen my Stefan RP's as Vantage, James Shark and James Shark/Corey Casey match. This one was for a place in WEW where I was up against Angelica Monroe. I won the RP battle with her. Do you think this RP is better than the previous ones Cody and James? I really enjoyed writing this up. Enjoy reading to the rest of you on the preview of the RP's I do as him.







Boxing match against Regina Halmich. Cologne, Germany. March 22nd 2001.

Back in two thousand and one. Stefan had his first in ring experience but it was in a boxing match against Regina Halmich who was a female boxing champion at the time. He also unveiled his nickname that was in boxing for the first time known as The Killerplauze. Plauze means chest in English. His opponent came into the ring first wearing a yellow coat and black shorts known as Regina Halmich and then comes out "The Killerplauze" Stefan Raab.

Clearly going into this boxing match Stefan was the underdog in this boxing match against Regina who had twelve knockouts to her name with a massive amount of wins which were thirty five and only one loss while Stefan had no experience at all with boxing. As round one started Stefan moved around in the ring and doing a few punches which missed until he punched her right in the head only until then that Regina got him backed into a corner blowing him with punches to his chest because he slipped up and then Stefan made an illegal move on Regina on pushing her away from the corner he was in. In the last 10 seconds in the first round Stefan give Regina some good blows to her head but it was clearly Regina dominating the round.

Round two were almost the same with Regina dominating all the rounds with Stefan delivering some good blows to Regina's head although there were times where Stefan was almost knocked out like in round two where he got himself completely open but then he came back delivering blows to her head and bits to her chest too. He lasted quite a while with her.

Round three was where it got really violent with Regina where he was knocked down by her as he slowly got up and then suddenly Regina punched Stefan so hard that he nose ended up being broken as he wiped blood on the towel and it was busted wide open as he continued the fight against Regina again punched her in the head and then as the round three had finished. Stefan was sitting down with his trainers trying to stop the bleeding on his nose but by round four started it started to bleed again as he was completely dominated by Regina at this point and there was no chance of him winning the match now.

The last round round five where Stefan got more angry as he done a few punches and then Regina caught him with a left jab to his nose and the referee stopped the match when he sees that there was more blood to his nose as Stefan wanted to carry on with the fight as so did his trainers as they were arguing for a minute until the referee finally let them go at it only for the referee to stop again and Stefan really got mad with the referee as so did his trainer because of his nose being busted wide open and again the ref let him carry on again until the last 10 seconds of the match it was all over and the winner of the match was Regina Halmich as she dominated all the rounds that Stefan was in.

It was a tough loss for Stefan but he had learned a lot that he had to do a lot of training for future references and that of course people knew he was going to be taken the piss out of but at the end of the day to Stefan it was worth it as it was really well promoted and the crowd were cheering Stefan and he walked away with spirit in himself knowing he could do something like this again. He was born with the killer instinct in him with his boxing as he then went home after a tough loss against Regina seeing his girlfriend that he was with.

Training behind the scenes. Sao Paulo, Brazil. Wednesday 18th July

The cameras were allowed to go to a really special wrestling school that Stefan got accepted in because he needed somewhere to gain some skills for the match against Angelica since he knows that was what cost him the match against Vantage was the lack of experience he had in wrestling but that was somewhere he had gained a lot of it since then and he was a changed man as well as he was more angry and he had to battle his drink problem which actually he was coping really well. He hadn't drank anything since the week before the original fight was originally going to happen when he went to Angelica's house to destroy things. He was in the ring with a couple of his friends and trainers that were there to help him and he done a real big scoop slam on his friend and he was even getting real aggressive with the moves he done along with doing an arm drag and doing an arm bar move.

He really wanted to drink alcohol as he had missed it and although he had been training for five weeks that was his lowest point was the addiction for alcohol and while people went away from him to get rest. Stefan went to the pub which wasn't far from the wrestling school he was at and he brought a bottle of whiskey and drank it all before going back to the wrestling school and he felt a lot better and then he decided to find a razor to shave the side of his hair off just like the first boxing match he had against Regina Halmich and now his hair turns out to look just like this.



He had to sweep the floor to get rid of the hair pieces off the floor and throws them all in the bin outside of the wrestling school along with the bottle of whiskey he just had to get rid of the evidence of the alcohol thing and then 20 minutes later his trainers and his friends came back into the school and one of them begins to speak.

Michael Jones: What the fuck have you done to your hair Stefan?

Stefan Raab: I shaved it off because this match with Angelica is exactly the same as that boxing match I had with Regina but the difference is that Angelica is a woman's champion in the world of wrestling and Regina was a women's champion in the world of boxing and I needed a change of things style wise for the match up.

Michael thought his hair was completely messed up as that wasn't the way to do it but they had to put up with it as he wasn't too happy with Stefan right about now with him shaving his hair off making him look like he was an evil guy and he didn't like it at all.

Michael Jones: I really don't like it at all Stefan as it made you look like to be a mad man and you should leave it to the hairdresser to do that in the future.

Then Elton came in to the wrestling gym and sees the trainer arguing with Stefan because of him shaving the side of his hair off and only the middle bit of his hair wasn't shaved off because Stefan didn't want to have a bald head. Elton gets up to Michael's face and looks straight at him in the eye.

Elton: I personally think it suits Stefan nicely and he did have this style in his boxing match with Regina that he's already told you about. Good idea Stefan.

Stefan just wanted to get on with training right about now as his match with Angelica especially in the type of match was getting closer and also he hadn't been in a steel cage match before but other wrestlers have told him all about it.

Stefan Raab: Guys just shut the fuck up and let me carry on training against my friend here.

Michael Jones: Now you are talking some sense Stefan thank Christ for once let me see you destroy your friend in the ring and pretend it's Angelica in there that you are facing only without the steel cage around you.

The camera crew were really lucky that they were allowed to go behind the scenes to see what Stefan can do in the ring because not many people were allowed to go to this private wrestling school that Stefan was at while Elton was watching his best friend from outside of the ring and Elton was going to be at the Crossroads Pay Per View watching Stefan wrestle against Angelica because he knows that everyone is going to be against Stefan and Elton needed to come and support him for his match with Angelica and also he was rumoured to be a reporter before the match as well. Stefan was ready to go and he had developed a lot of muscle mass, lost a lot of weight and even developed a six pack on his chest just the amount of training, gym work and the diet he has been on.

He carried on wrestling again and he used one of his finishing moves which was The Killercutter which is a diamond cutter and then he powerslammed the girl to the mat and then placed her for the pin and just carried on wrestling throughout the entire time that he was wrestling since he had things to do the next few days like doing a press conference in Germany about the upcoming match up and even talking about the match against Angelica. The camera crew then go out of the wrestling school to let Stefan focus on his training that he had to do for the rest of the week.

Space Taxi to the sky. Up in Space. Friday 20th July.

Stefan was driving this special Space Taxi up in space as it was from a German film called Traumschiff Surprise Periode one as he even sang a song from the film called Space Taxi which actually became quite a big hit in Germany. A Space Taxi that Stefan was driving up in space looked like this.



He had a big smirk on his face knowing what he was going to say about Angelica and he clearly knows that Angelica was getting fooled big time as he had told lies in the press conference just so she doesn't know what he has been doing behind the scenes although the rumours about him being a full time wrestler were almost right as he had been considering it a lot these last few weeks as well as the space taxi looked just like a podracer in Star Wars but this version was modified to carry more than one person on this taxi. It could carry up to 15 people but Stefan was in one alone as he drove around as he was wearing a blue shirt with black trousers and black shoes.

He knows that even in the press conference that he was playing mind games with Angelica then as he hasn't told any secrets to what other things he has been doing behind the scenes and it wasn't just training either. He begins to speak while he was driving this taxi around in space just having a bit of fun.

Stefan Raab: Oh Angelica. How much fun I have had on playing mind games with you these last few weeks what a pity that you never hit back at me once except only at the beginning when you told me if I touch another wrestler then I get fired. How dumb that makes you feel right now huh that I have actually done that on Adrenaline and then costing you the win these last two weeks on Animosity? You are such a stupid little girl thinking how easy you got this match in the bag when you have no idea what I been doing behind the scenes at all.

Stefan was still playing games with Angelica's head a little as he is keeping a secret that only a few people know about and Angelica along with the other people in WEW didn't as he decided he will tell her the secret but not now as he wanted to continue trash talking about Angelica and this steel cage match that he was in for the first time in his life he had taken part in something like this. He knows that the ratings will hit very high for the match. Suddenly there was a podracer that wanted to battle with Stefan.

Stefan Raab: Oh shit. Time to bust some caps into that stupid podracer.

It certainly was taking the piss out of Star Wars as he had guns that were on the side of the taxi and he was trying to get away from it when suddenly the podracer crashed into the wall as there was no damage to the taxi as he then drove back up in space after battling with the podracer in the battle zone that was created just purely for battles against other pilots in space that he decided to be at as Stefan was feeling really confident right now that he clearly knows he was the underdog but knowing the mind games were still there.

Stefan Raab: What a shame that you think I am overweight just because of what you seen recently well that has changed and you will see because I have lost a heck a lot of weight to be in this match with you and there is nothing about me that makes me think I am overweight now. Just so you know that I been in the gym non fucking stop for the last four days without having anything to eat because I am serious about this match although it may not seem like it but I have and there is a lot of changes that I have done already like having more experience in the ring than the last time, learned some more moves and changing my style like my hair and even how much in shape I am for our match as well as the style of my wrestling in the ring.

Stefan was saying those things just so Angelica could picture that he had been training a lot these last few weeks which was why Stefan had been so quiet on twitter because he was indeed serious as he was going to talk into this monster voice that he had developed that he never spoke in before as he clearly was going to be a German monster in the ring as he had been angry more at the comments he had heard recently about his fiancée and his baby as it made the taxi fly like mad as that was one thing that does get under his skin was involving his girl into this as he hated that Angelica was getting Fizz involve in the war that him and Angelica were having.

Another podracer wanted to fight Stefan as he flew back down to the battle arena and was shooting at the podracer taking it down for the count as he used a bomb to the pod and then it exploded right in front of him as Stefan was always being picked to fight today even though he was a complete beginner to the whole fighting thing in space but yet he was winning two fights but there was a slight damage to the taxi but he had another taxi to fly with if something happened with this one on the landing deck that he had planned on the other side of space and he also got a astronaut outfit because he was going to stand on the moon later on showing the world how much he was enjoying to be hated than he did before as he flew back up in space in the darkness again.

Stefan Raab: I don't find you any better than Vantage in fact you are worse than him at least he had the decency to piss me off at times you just think you have pissed me off well you have by bringing Fizz into this whole situation but she has had no part of this war between us at all but that's the only time you have. In fact she hasn't even been training me this time around nor have Brutus and Tom actually. They have just been watching me and I have told both Tom and Brutus not to get involved in our match because I want to win this fight on my own and I know I can do it since well I have wrestled on my own before without any help not like Nathan Parker although I give him credit on pushing my friends farther up the ladder but he couldn't win a match on his own.

Although Stefan had a liking to Nathan because he did do him a favour on actually turning things around in the contract on him not being allowed to hit a wrestler. He was telling the truth that he couldn't win a match on his own without Gods Against Men by his side trying to help Nathan win matches but that was something Stefan knows he can do though especially that he certainly was making a name for himself in WEW as he was getting just that much closer on telling Angelica the secret that he had been hiding very well as he had cost her two matches as of late making her be on a losing streak as he was going around in circles with the space taxi that he was flying as he was enjoying every minute of it.

He was close on landing on the moon real soon as he decided to get out of the clothes that he was wearing now and put on an astronaut outfit as he still was talking in a monster voice that he had gained from drinking alcohol but that was something he hadn't been doing at all this week because of the test he had to do on the day of the fight but he has no idea when in the day that will be but he knows that he will pass quite easily as that was due to Daniel Ramelb's decision to get Stefan tested for alcohol by a breathalyser.

He now landed the taxi on the moon as he walked on there and stood right in the middle of it with a big smile on his face going to tell the secret that he was hiding from Angelica as he was on the moon in an astronaut outfit and he was enjoying every minute of being in space which was something different compared to doing his TV Total shows which he was done with and was thinking about retiring from the entertainment business because he has done everything he could do.

Stefan Raab: I have told a lot of lies already Angelica as you know that I been training with Lya in Brazil that you already know but there is a few things that will come as a complete surprise for you and the rest of the WEW roster. You see while you have been busy wrestling in WEW against other people. I have as well but not in WEW though. I have been getting experience in the ring in two other wrestling companies one of them is in Xtreme Wrestling Entertainment where I have been wrestling in hardcore matches and had a win over Adree Perez as of late and faced against Jack Mercer a hall of framer in a PPV event a few weeks ago.

Stefan paused for a bit as he walked around the moon and he knows this announcement he was going to talk about will shock her even more than what he announced right now as he had been wrestling so he could gain a lot of experience and gaining a lot of confidence as well as he was smiling on what happened on the latest taping of a different wrestling company this week and he sees the other astronauts there that were in his way. He pushed them quite hard and kicking them off the moon as he wanted to be the only one left standing but some male astronaut kept coming back to the moon and he begins to speak to it.

Stefan Raab: Get the fuck out of my way or I will throw your ass all the way down to the planet earth.

The astronaut didn't listen as Stefan did indeed grab it by the throat and choked slammed him all the way down to the earth that he had come from as Stefan had a smile on his face knowing he was proud that he had done something like that and knowing that he will do that to Angelica in a steel cage match but he had more things to talk about like the other wrestling company he wrestled in and it was a place that Angelica wrestled in before.

Stefan Raab: Another wrestling company that I have been wrestling in is a place called Action Packed Wrestling you know that place right? Yes I do know that you have wrestled there before when you took part in the Survive and Conquer royal rumble match but that's where I have done most of my achievements getting my first wrestling win in my first match without any help and winning the tag match with another guy I was teaming with to go through to the battle royal to be apart of the test of the best tournament but I didn't win that match as someone threw me out at the last second to earn their spot to that tournament. You know that Monday on the draft show where you lost to Paula Gonzalez? That was the best day of my life because on that same night I won the fatal four way match for a chance to go for the North American title that I was going to be facing against Evan Envi only that I got screwed from winning that match because Carmen Rivera came and interrupted the match. I was so close on winning that title but I got screwed by Carmen and Evan who used the brass knuckles and knocked me out and pinned me for the three count.

The secrets were out as he was smiling on how silly it made Angelica think that all of this time he had only been training and doing gym work and not actually wrestling as he was standing on the moon talking about this as he decided that it was time to go off the moon being on his own and going back into the taxi to go and find some more podracers and even spaceships to shoot at as he started the taxi up and went down back into the battle arena waiting around to see if anyone wanted to face him in an all out duel but at the same time he wanted to carry on talking about the match as he turned back into his normal voice again.

Stefan Raab: Now you have really made yourself look stupid on the things you said about me on twitter about me not being a wrestler when all of this time I have. No one knew about it apart from Fizz, Brutus, Tom, my cousin Jake who is in the cutthroat competition and other friends of mine. How do you feel now Angelica? I wanted to say that to you before the match started so you can take me a bit more seriously as a wrestler now rather than thinking that it's all been a silly joke. Now if you excuse me I will talk more about you and the match tomorrow as I got a battle on my hands to deal with.

Stefan was done talking about the secret and bits about the match it was time for him to be in a battle against all of these podracers as he was the only person on the battle field driving a taxi that was specially used for space just like in the German movie that was very well known where he was from more because of the song he sang that got in the top 5 in the charts and none of the racers put up any challenge for Stefan at all as he won them all before going back onto planet earth and getting some rest before going back to the hotel room to get some rest.

Trapped in a cage. Chicago, Illinois. Sunday 1st of July.

It was a day before his big match against Angelica as he got into the ring and he told someone to put the cage down on him just so he could feel what it was going to be like tomorrow night but he was on his own tonight as there was no fans in the arena just him sitting in the ring on his own looking around the cage and now he was going to continue talking in his monster voice because he had a lot more to say and heck he hadn't really talked that much about the cage match that he was going to be in tomorrow night in front of the fans and the German audience at home as it was going to be shown live on Prosieben the channel where his TV Total shows are going to be on.

Stefan Raab: Oh you thought I was done talking wasn't you Angelica? Nope I am not done because I have a lot more to say about the match. I know that you liked my announcement that I said yesterday while I was in space now you start taking this match seriously you silly clueless bitch. Now I know you are still pissed off about burning the American flag but that's the reaction I was expecting from you since we know all Americans love their country so much and it's very funny that you don't notice that the top country for over weighted people is in fact America over all the other countries because they are lazy and can't be arsed to go to the gym everyday which I have been doing every single day like I have said yesterday.

Stefan hid the secret from everyone because he didn't want anyone to know the game plan he had with wrestling until nearer the time which he did yesterday. He stood up and was touching the cage with his hands and punched the cage with his fist to feel what it was going to be like as he was bare chested showing his six pack and the hair cut that he had done to make him look like he was going to be a killer in the ring. He was ready and he knows that it was going to be one heck of a brutal match he has ahead of him.

He feels the cage with his hands as he pressed them pretty hard onto the cage and then clinches his hands together as he runs to the cage and does a shoulder block to it feeling what it would be like if Angelica throws him to the cage and it didn't hurt him at all as he in fact liked the experience that he will get just from doing that as he sat back down in the ring being trapped as there was no way out apart from climbing the cage but he wasn't ready to leave yet.

Stefan Raab: Can I call you Angie or will I offend you if I do oh why do I care if I do since I have offended your family a lot as of late and do you know why? Because you done fuck all to make me be scared of you and then I hear this shit about how you caused your dad to pass away. You never cared about your dad or anyone but yourself you selfish stupid American. You let your dad pass away because you was selfish so why did you care so much when I burned the American flag? I am really glad that I have gotten you so pissed off as of late that no one else has ever done before. Do you know what else I have done lately?

Stefan knew all about Angelica's father's death as he did pause for a second knowing that was really going to hurt Angelica's feelings on what he will say next but why not as it hurt him when he hears Angelica getting Fizz involved in the war between him and her and she really had pushed it where Stefan thought it was a good idea just to tell her where he had went as he had a big smile on his face knowing that he is going to cross the line and he knows all about her friend that Angelica was going to team up with Sapphire Marino who he would talk about as well.

He had got a steel chair in the ring as well as finding a head and a pen under the ring earlier and drew Angelica's face on there and even drew her hair on there as he sellotaped the head onto the cage and using the steel chair he smashed it onto the head of Angelica really hard and made a dent in the chair as he smiled.

Stefan Raab: I went to your dad's grave and I urinated and spat on it after I left space sending your family a message that you along with the rest of your stupid family including your sister are a fucking joke around here include Alakai as well who is sticking up for you a lot as of late. God Angelica you are so stupid there is absolutely nothing you can do to me that will scare me right now. Where's the bitchiness I once saw of you or did I get you weakened so badly that you now fear me? Aww look how much Angie cried when I burned the American flag down on Animosity and how I burned your clothes and pissed on them at Legacy. Very cute and you got so weak that you went to rant at your best friend on Sapphire Marino because of the hell I have caused on you as of late.

Stefan had crossed the line on going to her dad's grave and spat and pissed on it but he wanted to send her a message that no one has ever done before as he hadn't regretted anything he did as he was certainly turning into a complete monster and it was a really scary one as well as he felt he was worse than when Fizz was one. He had a deep voice again as he knows that would put Fizz and their baby at risk even more but he knows everything he has to do to protect her and his soon to be child and he was ready for everything that someone would try to do to Fizz and his child.

He had gotten a lot stronger on bottling his feelings up as he had grown not to care what people have said after experiencing wrestling in two other companies that he wrestled in and he was starting to be the most hated guy in APW and he was certainly a real hated guy in WEW right now as he smashed the steel chair on the plastic head of Angelica causing a dent in the chair as he showed the empty arena crowd on the head smashing that he done on Angelica as he visions it in his mind that tomorrow night there will be a lot of hardcore weapons to be used and he could even use a steel cage as a weapon as well.

Stefan Raab: You so do not know the meaning of my nickname what I meant by the pain that you will suffer in this steel cage match tomorrow night. My nickname The Killerplauze means that you are the one that's going to be killed in the ring and I will throw you towards the cage and get you busted wide open with your blood on my hands. Oh your boyfriend Jesus Jacobo I almost forgot about him being around you he can enjoy hearing you scream as well since he is pathetic and he doesn't care about you or even love you the way you think he does.

Stefan had a few more words to say before taking the head off the cage and dropped it in the ring and he looks at the dent chair that he hit the head on it really hard knowing that is what could happen in the match tomorrow night. He sat back down in the middle of the ring thinking a lot about the match tomorrow knowing he was the underdog but he couldn't really care less about that as he was going to go out there and prove a lot of people wrong even himself.

Stefan Raab: You are not going to stop me from training in the Starrdome and you certainly are not going to win this match against me. I am going to make sure that your career is finished in wrestling and then you be so embarrassed that you will end up dropping the Starlet title that you are holding. I am going to defeat you in either way possible as I believe it's by either pinfall, submission or escaping the cage by the door or climbing out of the cage.

Stefan was going a bit crazy with the things he had said just now as he was a crazy motherfucker that doesn't get scared of anything during the whole time of him doing stunts for his TV Total show. He had turned into this monster that hated America and loved his own country along with United Kingdom with his friends being in a British team. It was now dark in the arena and Stefan was all alone in the ring without anyone there. He loves to talk in the dark as he continues to speak.

Stefan Raab: I have never been busted open since I have been wrestling because it's been me that's busted my opponents open first in these sorts of matches. I sense fear into your eyes every time I see you knowing you will lose to me tomorrow night. Fear The Killerplauze and Your Gonna Get Raabinated.

Stefan had finally finished talking about the match as the cage went up and he got out of the ring in darkness smiling to himself knowing he has the win in the bag and walked out of the arena finding something to do before going to sleep for gym training and entering in the biggest match of his life tomorrow night.

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Post by JFRESH on Fri Jul 27, 2012 6:12 pm

Way better than the ones I saw before. #schwag
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Post by Guest on Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:19 pm

I am glad you liked it as that is my best work of Stefan to date. He's gone completely heel and turned into this monster that hates America with a passion. An evil bastard LOL.

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Post by JFRESH on Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:47 pm

LOL

he was hated on when he was all nice and shit, now he's even more hated on.
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Post by Guest on Mon Jul 30, 2012 4:30 pm

i love gimmick wher they are anti-america. im bout to have some fun finding a storyline for Raab lol

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Post by Guest on Mon Jul 30, 2012 5:31 pm

HEHE go for it as I love my own version of Stefan. I really love playing this character as he's one of my favourites I play.

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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 31, 2012 12:08 am

good stuff mr. raab

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